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rida

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Haikus

A topic to post haikus,they don't have to be yours.

One of my favourites

Mild wind, timeliness
honeycomb, fire separates
yesterday, patient.

^ not written by me

I look at cold snow
Making a large white blanket
Every Christmas Eve

^ written by me ages ago

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espeon

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Re: Haikus

hmmm lets see a sasusaku haiku that i wrote

A flower petal
Falls gracefully from the tree
And lands in her hair

I touch his dark hair
And look in his onyx eyes.
Why are they so cold?

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mathsyperson

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Re: Haikus

Very good topic.
Haikus are excellent things.
Indubitably.

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rida

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Re: Haikus

the river cries sadly
like it never saw happiness
humanity took it

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Zhylliolom

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Re: Haikus

It takes just one man
To push the big red button
And destroy the Earth

espeon

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Re: Haikus

lmfao zhylliolom!

i had a ballad about a river.

ummmm lets think

years of silence cries
lasting a eternity
will it ever stop?

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LQ

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Re: Haikus

Gone with a spaceship
Looking for holes
Selfish if you breach the walls

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rida

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Re: Haikus

Hiding in darkness
Where evil lurks and plays
A light lies untouched

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espeon

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Re: Haikus

onyx eyes meet hers
emerald eyes embrace his
peacefully lay there

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rida

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Re: Haikus

comment about haikus
too,so people know if you
like them,excellent

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Devantè

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Re: Haikus

She cries for me now
Crying a river, under
A friendly fire.

rida

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Re: Haikus

Japanese stuff rules
You will agree after
You watch Naruto

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espeon

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Re: Haikus

sasuke against naruto (sasuke is only 2 syllables the dont say sas-soos-kay just sas-kay
fighting for her love
sakura who will she choose?

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Devantè

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Re: Haikus

The universe has
A way of course-correcting
Itself. We have hope.

espeon

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Re: Haikus

a desperate sombre cry
chidori against
raesengan why don't they stop?

(raesengan is ra-sen-gun)

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Toast

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Re: Haikus

I'm confused, how does this Haiku thing work? I've tried to work it out by reading some of yours but posts are inconsistent with regards to the number of words and/or syllables in each lines.

Actually, I think we have some pretty good Haiku going on in the 'Person Above, Left, and Below" thread XD.

Last edited by Toast (2007-02-19 23:21:28)

mathsyperson

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Re: Haikus

Five, seven and five.
Those amounts of syllables,
Are found in each line.

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English has great words.
Some are 'foxtrot', 'kerfuffle',
And 'shenanigans'.

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espeon

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Re: Haikus

why do i cry now?
will i ever find out why?
or am i just mad?

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Devantè

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Re: Haikus

This thread is all gone
It seems no one likes haikus
What happened to us?

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Two and two are 5
5 and 5 form a beehive
Bees among bees...rest.

luca-deltodesco

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Re: Haikus

why am i still here?
for i am not quite sure why
it must have been you.

... lol, first try ever

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rida

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Re: Haikus

Gaara is so cool
When he is Kazekage
He fights Deidara

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Zach

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Re: Haikus

Haikus are easy,
But sometimes they don't make sense,
Refridgerator.

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lightning

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Re: Haikus

AHAHAHAHA,
Zach you make me laugh!
i liken the pancakes!pie!mate!

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Devantè

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Re: Haikus

Lightning, you have not
Made the haiku correctly
It's 5-7-5.

JaneFairfax

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Re: Haikus

Haikus are sublime.
I can even make them rhyme
Though not all the time.